Subgenres at the ready

When I spoke frivolously about Bluegrass and Country being kissin’ cousins, turns out bluegrass is a subgenre of country: a kinda country if you will.

Knowing that may change the way you approach a form but it shouldn’t. Concentrate on mountain shacks and moonshine. Or bend your own theme to the hoedown.

Every genre has its subgenres with acid jazz and doom metal sharing the same musical planet with bebop and hair metal. The list is endless. Country morphs with the countryside, metal clangs to ponderous life, folk have common concerns but clashing credos that take greater precedence further down the road, rock as we’ve remarked before is capable of splitting itself so far that even its subgenres have subgenres of their own.

Do I think that there is much to take from this when writing the words to a song? This depends on how far you want to drill down. If you want a set full of sludge metal then there are songwriting approaches that will help.

To put this in perspective from my own songwriting journal. The pieces I wrote in the remainder of September (after I’d left the verandah) don’t show any signs of genre at any level. Regardless of size, some are poems and others lyrics but this isn’t always the upfornt intention.

It wouldn’t be wise to interrupt this process by pondering whether it’s hard rock

Here’s a rundown:

  • Practicality 7-8 / 9 / 2015
  • Probably Not 11-12 / 9 / 2015
  • [revised setlist]
  • draft piece with opening line ‘You look nice in that lawsuit’ 13 / 9/ 2015
  • The Same Set of Questions 14 / 9/ 2015
  • Returnable 17 / 9 / 2015
  • Could You Commit to Deluxe 17 / 9 / 2015
  • P.O.V. first version
  • P.O.V. second draft
  • P.O.V. third draft
  • Exclamation Marks 22 / 9 / 2015

Now admittedly I’m not writing these with genre in mind. These are from my exercise book and were written on the train. I’ve got two later pieces I wrote a couple of days ago and there was a conscious decision to go with the flow to the point of not making (immediate) sense. As the lines appear on the page you wonder what the purpose is  lo, sitting up in bed I can see actual songs emerge in second drafts for both. Just like that.

If the Muse can lead you through then you’re free to go in all directions and, unless you’re wedded to alt country, you’ll get more from it

In my tattered notebook I have a couple of solid formal pieces, I have the freedom to scribble in thoughts on stuff relevant to songs and singing and past pieces that work, a vague polemic, a poem that doesn’t work (yes, there’s the odd one) before hitting a song and spending a bit of time on it, which was P.O.V which I wrote the first draft for on the eighteenth, chorus on nineteenth (I think that’s a first, writing the chorus the following day), second draft also on the nineteenth probably on the train home, and third and final draft on the twentieth of September.

For your delectation – this time just the finished song

P.O.V

It's in our line of sight
It's finally come to light
Three sixty degrees
Far across the seas
Sees everything seize everything

 
We're not blind to the kind
 or what we expect to find
in corners of the mind
Are they reflected 
witness protected

In a mirrored mirage
   Objects enlarged
The power of purview
 Ask after askance and askew

From every angle perception dangles
In every direction scene selection

Some folks focus is hocus pocus
as like as loco at that locus

Get obsessed with what is best
  who is blessed
and all that is left to detest

If you track the tried and true
  even truths that tried
          and withdrew
Their P.O.V
There P.O.V
[repeat]


 

 

 

Newgrass or New Farm

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For the listener to understand the story being told in Side Verandah Blues (remembering that a song tells a story differently to other narrative forms),they must know that kids in the country work out in the paddock. The range of activities here is contrasted with a life and world of experience in towns and cities far away.

There is still the danger that, with the move to more impressionistic imagery in subsequent drafts, the song is newgrass at best.

The exercise of writing to genre produces as rewarding results as other disciplines and exercises, even when the finished product is something other than the assignment requires.

If you don’t go in expecting to produce a Cuckoo there’s no foul

 

The grass is always bluer (on the other side)

We know how to retrofit songs to genre or not as the case may be. There’s always a fall back if you do have to write a bluegrass number for instance.

  1. Rely on your knowledge of the work of Lester Flatt and Earl Scruggs or Bill Monroe to inform the way you construct the song
  2. Use classics to define the mood
  3. Look at the earliest songs and then note the amount of movement, if any, lyrically
  4. See the way the words fit with the song

When I was looking at what I could bring to bluegrass or take from it, I settled on two things: locale and narrative form

I live in mountains but not Appalachian Mountains so how do I navigate to that form of storytelling. Well, I grew up on a farm but I’ve always understood that to mean, at least in the Australian outback, country (or, as it used to be known at times, country & western)

The standards all have narratives but they vary between first, second and third person and ‘Oh Death‘ and ‘In the Pines‘ switch narrative voices in a kind of one-person call and response. They can be about one person in particular, such as John Henry or about the place they live and the conditions they operate under. For that reason I didn’t think this other song I was writing about Boxes had the right sentiment or style.

There isn’t a lot of metaphor in bluegrass (to the point that that’s really Death talking) so I kept returning to the childhood home. If it wasn’t about rodeos or mustering, or the lives and loves of the countryside then perhaps I could cleave closer to bluegrass than its kissin’ cousin, country

And then I thought about the verandah and that seemed underexplored enough to give fresh paint. At first I was influenced by what I was learning about existing bluegrass numbers and kept the scene literal but once I had that first draft I was able to move into a more poetic but, hopefully, still authentic recreation of a mood or feeling or impression

The Verandah

The verandah the verandah
 I'll see you out there on the verandah

 A day out in the paddock as your thoughts go round and round
 and it's you and other tractors that make the only sound
 Some solvol and a wash bowl it's time to scrub clean
 Waiting for tea and there is me finding a place to lean
 on the verandah
Cosmopolitan capers occur in cafes far away
 but out here in this red dirt is where I've said I'll stay
 With books borrowed from the library
 and a paper a week old
 Where the main instruction is
 just do what you're told
and the only place to escape
 is the verandah
 go outside and play
 on the verandah

I wrote that on the thirtieth. It wasn’t til the third of September that I wrote two more drafts; this time the song had not only loosened its style, it had made other changes that had an effect on both narrative and structure. And it had changed name

Side Verandah Blues

All day long I've been going round
Sharing sounds with my surrounds
Solvol and a wash bowl it's time to scrub clean
Waiting for tea and there's me find a place to lean
 on the verandah

Cosmopolitan capers in clubs far away
While here in the red dirt I've said I'll stay
Read the papers weak and old
The main instruction 'Do what you're told'

and the only place to escape
 is the verandah
go outside and play
 on the verandah

Side Verandah Blues (3)

All day long I've been going round
Sharing sounds with my surrounds
Solvol and a wash bowl it's time to scrub clean
Waiting for tea there's me finding a place to lean
 on the verandah

Cosmopolitan capers in clubs far away
While here in the red dirt I've said I will stay
The news is a week old, weak and old
The only instruction to do what you're told

and the one place to escape
 is the verandah
go outside and play
 on the verandah

Genreveal later

I believe songwriting is less about authenticity than it is fidelity to the song. While you can play games that you know beforehand are not going to come off, the preponderance of time spent in serious purpose, as it were,  is on working up a song rather than working out a song or shoehorning a song.

That said, you have to know what you’re treading lightly around before you can do so successfully. The folk musics of Macedonia or Malta or Madagascar or Mali or Mexico are bound to have exerted their influence at some point in history and we have learnt from our own traditions as much as we have ignored, say, ritual music or rural music found nowhere else. It’s true that the blues and other regional music forms do make their presence felt in far off approximations. Regardless of what you think of the Bluesbreakers or Blues Influence or other variously identified by the music they play, bands. No matter what opinion you hold on the Yardbirds or any white group that did a blues cover ever.

One can readily say the same for jazz and rock’n’roll. Not to mention disco, funk, rhythm’n’blues, soul, gospel, rap,

Two things to bear in mind:

  • in the early pre-recording days of field music, songs were passed on from one musician to the next, often with embellisments or swapped lines;
  • nobody preaches authenticity to the makers of Moog sythesizer recordings nor trouble to argue the origin or adherence of someone with an emulator under their arm

I’m going to do something foolhardy and argue with the viewpoint of a black female singer and touring band leader, and say that I don’t think it’s as cut and dried as saying that it’s rock music when some white band plays it and then R & B when the black guy does it. Chuck Berry and Bo Diddley are in all likelihood the premier rock’n’roll singer-songwriters. What Buddy Holly wrote and Bill Haley didn’t write are essential part of the canon but they don’t have either the number of classics nor the resonance. There are enough covers of Who Do You Love? out there to sink a rockin’ battleship.

 

Bluesed and bettered

As with the other significant genres, blues has many variations: jump blues, country blues, folk blues, Chicago blues. I have delved as far as I care to in the appropriated form (and I know that all the great genres and offshoots are appropriated)

I think some of the language in death cafe is a little dense for the blues, which comes right out and says it. Or, at least, provides a colourful metaphor that gives us the full nudge and wink.

The humour is earthy not esoteric. The drama is in real life depiction of what the songwriter experiences. Stories are about the protagonist in situations. There’s a lot of first person: I’m a back door man, I’m a hoochie coochie man, I’m the seventh son

You know and I know that that is the same man. One Willie Dixon. In my opinion the greatest blues songwriter.

The blues has such diversity that these observations can’t cover all of the genre all the time. But they’re a good field guide.

We’ve had a few Blues over the years

The reason i folded blues into a discussion on the music forms that followed is because I have written my blues songs and don’t feel a need to go back to the genre and spoil things. Berko’s Blues was the habit of describing one’s own blues – and thereby the rules are particular to your own woes and circumstance – and Imaginary Blues could have started out as a piece using the novel idea of a blues that isn’t real but it became a solid story much in the tradition.

I did, however, write this piece when I had moved to muse over the blues so it counts. There are so many genres devoted to decay and putrefaction, to the yawning grave, that a song using death as a motif would be less likely to settle on the blues, which is more about the misery and tribulations of the living.

I wrote this when I read about the concept in our local gazette. The death café is a place where people can gather to mourn the dead as it is not usually a topic for social gatherings. Such good songwriting material could reap rewards even for the beginning wordsmith so I wasted no time; it was a quick recovery from some of the scribblings that preceded it. But I never lose any sleep over crummier or more difficult efforts. There’s plenty of good to be focused on but it’s not even that. The focus for me is always in writing the song that the concept or notion or idea or subject object suggest.  The rest flows from that.

death café

Cut across to where they're 
  cutting up croissants
In memoriam in an ornante font
Carried the coffin, pause for a coffee
Read back the preacher's notes
The procession is passing
Time to make the toast
at the death café at the death café 

This really does take the cake
Clear the tables and chairs
and try to stay a wake
Disguised disgust
well they were quite old
Will the will be discussed
before the body's cold
at the death café at the death café 

You better believe  brave the bereaved
always lilies and lollies at hand
Proprietor a picture of piety
Weeping upon demand

Only started this business
so we'd be a witness
Condolence  sincere regret
A welcome repast to those who have passed
Others still with us yet
at the death café  at the death café 

Bilious billy, yes

Aside

Before considering whether it’s worth cycling through psychobilly, I don’t even see much need to analyse whether those last pieces are in the right vein.

What I do want to mention is the reason why I think the Windfarm Commissioner works: it’s in first person. There may not the hubris or identification of ‘I’m a tiger’ ‘I’m the goo goo mup’ or ‘I’m a rockabilly rebel [from head to toe]’

I doubt you could go to town on this and have ‘I’m a Sellout Liar with a Flag stuck up my Arse’. There has to be a sense in which the singer is proud of their prowess.

While there’s an underlying futility to the position and the concept behind it, it travels along. Just because the subject is unpalatable doesn’t mean that the song can’t be entertaining.

Putting this in context of other energy sources both moves it away from being a rant (which doesn’t belong to this music form unless there’s now an ‘arguabilly’) and introduces humour, which is an underlying feature of the genre; tongue in cheek though it may be at times.

 

Reinvention

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Reinvention

I'm ready to head into my own unknown
Where my asides collide my deeds overthrown
I'm prepared to be scared into moments anew
A penny for the many who are now the few
 seeking reinvention

I'll tinker with the blinkers til they finally come off
Fashion all forebodings and hold them aloft
I'll shatter the shutters shot through with chagrin
A wayward display shows I'm anxious to win

The creaks I've had for weeks
   are from cogs that are spinning
A stirring for the whirring
   like it was at the beginning

Further drafts

If you did get wind of that last turbine driven rockabilly number you probably found the syllable count to be the most contentious part.

You could argue about whether a commissioner of any energy system needs to act as a metaphor for the kind of interests displayed by the billies, if I can call them that (just recently I noticed that a new rock festival coming to Katoomba will feature, among other acts, one doing horrorbilly), and I don’t think a po-faced folk rendition would have worked in the context of leather jackets and quiffs. Can anything political invade rockabilly turf? The apocalyptic end of shockabilly variations is usually cast in terms such as This is the Day the Sun Burned Down – where they are definitely not discussing solar funding.

II

I have been writing in the exercise book again and finding that ideas tend to come out in a more scattered order. This elaborates on some of the experiences I was recounting in earlier posts but there is a tangent at play when the handwritten lyrics move from nine, say, drafts of whole songs to lyrics delivered out of order and not immediately working despite an expectation that, by fitting and being in context, it should.

The first two pieces came about from the news that a work experience kid had discovered an exoplanet. Considering how recently we were ooh-ing and aah-ing about the first ones to be visible in the new telescopes, this trajectory reminds me of climbing Everest or breaking the four minute mile. It starts as this amazing thing and then is absorbed; at least enough for the bright and talented to pick up and pass on.

None of this ends up in the draft as I am in too much of a reverie about the space in general that the exoplanet planned for the chorus.

[Shockabilly draft]

EXOPLANET
Now that our vision extends beyond the reach
A yearning for learning but what will it teach
Worlds inconceivable light years away
A vaccuum to a void disperse and display
Exoplanet

The telescope tells of hope
Think outside the envelope
Stars adrift in a cosmic shift
The odds of gods being Man’s greatest gift
Exoplanet

One’s elusive now exclusive
The astronomical pay purview
A dearth on the earth we are but few
No offer up to this effusive
Exoplanet

In the past till the last we looked up to the sky
Wondered where what was there we asked why
As all our fronteirs are receding
Process the progress still proceeding
Exoplanet

I wrote this on 25th of June so my thoughts about it have changed but, at the time, I decided the following day to try again. This time not looking at the first version but using one particularly strong line ‘The odds of gods being Man’s greatest gift’

The vastness of the cosmos impresses me no end
As we all turn in circles in these eternal circles
Fade into the shade where life begins again

The burnt out stars that we still see
Their dead state serves as company
Switching on each witching hour
Wishing on a meteor shower

Light years away we like to stray
Where time determines night meets day
Space in place across divides
The odds that gods alone decide

Beyond every notion that we ever had
A guide to the good, a bid for the bad
Averaging out each moment of doubt

The vastness of the cosmos impresses me no end
As we turn in circles in these eternal circles
Ignite in the light life begins again

I wrote it but realised that it, too, had not stayed on exoplanets or, indeed, had much to say about them at all. It would require its own title. This doesn’t commonly happen as I tend to write from titles but, yes, I settled on IN THE SPACE PROVIDED

I let it rest there and went off and wrote a piece called REINVENTION as that was something foremost in my life, about to be offered a package.

Anyway, that was fine

I then returned to the space theme although I didn’t planet and really the two snatches there are more pissing around than anything.

And still I don’t have an exoplanet song.

 

 

 

Getting wind of Rockabilly

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I’ve had a bit of time to think about rockabilly. I’ve listened to plenty of punkabilly and shared in shockabilly. I remain partial to a double bass if it’s weilded well. I had kind of gone off handwriting poetry and songs, which is strange since it was the other way round for many years. Then this burst which was written on the train.

The Windfarm Commissioner
I’m the windfarm commissioner
I blow hot and cold
I’m the windfarm commissioner
and I do what I’m told
I don’t dig mines I’m not that kind
Won’t drill for oil Turn up on foreign soil
I’m the pointless product  of a compromised position
Something of an ether/ORE proposition
But I knew when they drew up my comission
(CHORUS)
I’m not your hydro hero have no geothermal cooling
Sent to rescind the wind ah who am I fooling?
Tilting at windmills like one Don Quixote
Freezing out free air you don’t say
All the turbines combined aligned against me

(CHORUS)

Where the four winds blow it’s my business to know
While Grandpa’s gone fission, his rod starts to glow
There’s a Middle East crisis
a self-corrupting Isis
Meanwhile my timing’s priceless
I’m the windfarm commissioner
I blow hot and cold
I’m the windfarm commissioner
and I’m worth my waiting gold