Catalogue

Writers are researchers, and the older among us can remember the drawers divided into different sections of the alphabet; you would look up the title of your subject and find a location on the shelves. It was a physical act from start to finish, with the sheet of paper and pen to write titles down in larger libraries.

Much of this activity is done from our desktops now, you can speculate what the effect of different media has on subject matter and inspiration.

The question you may be asking at this juncture is, does this mean I should keep little notes on card to refer to in my songwriting endeavours and I suppose that might work, but that’s not really the message of this post.

It’s more of a mental catalogue; an organisation of thoughts and a gathering of knowledge to pour into a song on the subject; whatever the subject happens to be.

The way I look at it, if you have the information at your fingertips – no, not your keypad typing fingers – then you’ll get the flow of the song. You can cogitate on a song; Leonard Cohen famously did so with “Hallelujah” a song that has had two hundred covers if my research is not wonky, or my memory, whichever the case.
This writing ‘extra’ verses and changing bits; perhaps moving verses and chorus around, is not inevitably part of the writing of any given song, but it can be.

The fact that a song can be written in a burst of creative enthusiasm or painstakingly over time, means that there are different methodologies and that both approaches are effective. Why, then, do I recommend a library technician (of which I was briefly one) approach to becoming a good songwriter? Because, just knowing the facts and the history behind objects and ideas shouldn’t preclude you from writing passionately or intensely on something close to heart. You are not doomed to dry discourse or academic meanderings just because you know stuff.

II

Let’s suppose – since I again eschew my authorial tone – that the narrative voice behind a song called ‘King Hit‘ has seen on the news of a fatal king hit; an unprovoked attack from a guy who had been running a rampage that night and smashing strangers in surrounding streets. Here your catalogue is what you know about king hits; the background of such activity. How can you go coldly to Clout on such a serious subject? You’re not showing people your notes, only using it as juice for your writing process and, as we’ve discussed in previous posts, it doesn’t do to stay close to the event that inspired the more general examination of what a king hit is.

Here you have the masculinity and macho elements; the very concept of going mano a mano (derived from mano y mano, I wouldn’t doubt). The whole discussion on whether it is cowardly to carry arms when you should use your fists. How you will take the subject to hand and write something meaningful or resonant is up to some other writer. I raise it as an example.

III

While I think of, the alphabetical approach – which we also see in the individual encyclopedia and compendium – does do a lot of subconscious organising of the neurons so that when they’re firing they recognise similar sound patterns. If you’re just going to look up bare knuckle fighting on Google or Yahoo or Bing, or Dogpile or Search, then the bar won’t have (a)risen and the bear lies unpoked.

All together now

So, in sum, while the songs we are writing may take their inspiration or construction from one aspect or another, there are no hard and fast rules to what a song MUST contain. You can work from a title as I do, or build from a line or couplet. You can decide that you have a subject or theme, and you want to explore that, thank you very much.
As an expert, my only role is to point out the pitfalls and illustrate the elements.

Let’s write a song – or, at least, a large part of one – and note what features are present and whether they were in consideration when it is being written.

Shall we settle with a further news item. Apart from taking us out of our obsessions, the act of capturing a point in time that will pass and lose its currency makes good practice; if it quickly dates, we still have the evidence of the process we underwent.

So let’s to the past president of Channel Nine, president of the Collingwood Football Club, commentator and game show host, and his repetition of what was seen widely as a racial slur. Now I don’t want to touch that event or express an opinion (you’d have to read Facebook pages for that) but it reminds me of an older, less politically correct, time, when the expression “you big ape” was bereft of any cultural context and was solely one of rough affection.

You Big Ape

You great big lug with your ugly mug
You’re a beast at your best
Beating your chest
You big ape

Guess what? I worked from the title. I told you I do that. Just don’t let that prevent you from using a different method.

The theme revives an almost archaic expression through the conduit of it appearing in a different context. I stay assiduously with the approach, once I have determined what it is. And I do this without much conscious thought. It comes as a result of other work I’m doing.

If you have your thinking caps on, you should be able to make something of this now. You want a song where a chanteuse is singing to her rough-hewn partner. The first verse has led with the lug comparison and the ugliness and mentioned the wider status of apes and the types of actions they are associated with, finishing with the term itself.

A girl gets the giggles at this gorilla
The man drill has shed inhibition
A monkey flinging shit in false affection
It’s simple to see he is a chimpanzee

This is different. It doesn’t follow from that first verse but you might rescue something from the scraps. It hardly sits well in its current incarnation.

Never forget that it’s not a competition to see how often you can reach a quality draft straight away. Take as long as you like or as long as the song needs.

I don’t think ape analogies need to name check every simian so perhaps we should have stopped with the order to which apes belong rather than ones that belong to it. You don’t need to be this scientific in correcting your approach but at least know aesthetically which bits work.

Ape behaviour is another matter. It’s here the flinging shit carries the most promise. It’s not there yet, but that may be because monkeys fling shit in derision or agitation, not because they like someone or appreciate their actions. And our Aussie vernacular cries for “slinging shit in [] affection” and I’m not sure you can quite pull off the two different activities and motivations.
(but I would definitely put the line in a leadlined box)

Anyway this second “verse” is more for mining ideas to carry the song forward. Normally you won’t see it.

You’ll want to carry on from the light-hearted affection of the first verse as this sets the right tone.
The best lines are ‘You’re a beast at your best/Beating your chest/You big ape’. If you do want to work from parts, this would be the part. You can either keep this rhythm in the language or the playfulness of ape-llation.

Taking things: a part

Nothing says that a song has to stem from any one part. Sometimes it’s more holistic and you barely know what the first words or images were that rushed to mind.

Nor are all good songs containing of especially memorable parts. It is possible to have a serviceable song that has no peaks or troughs and does and goes as you would expect.

You would be no more advised to pursue perfection in parts than to pay heed to those other features that are a distraction, not an aid. Write the song and let it take its own path and display its own parts.

For all you know, the part that matters to people is the grouped chorus or other addition that wasn’t part of your original thought; or even what you’ve taken to the others. The extent to which you can let this go – if it works – is one of the challenges.