Writing to theme

There’s a difference between not stopping to think about what the theme of your piece is (a balking mechanism if I ever heard) and writing to a theme. If the theme already exists then write the song and, with the right skill, it will stand with any work produced to that theme.

So, let’s keep with the idea of choosing from events as they occur, to remove subjective sensibility from the process. After all, if you are asked to write to a theme, already you are at one remove to creating a work from scratch. If you had to write a song on the subject of where to shoot – bearing in mind that this is derived from the state government decision to allow shooting in national parks, and the fact that the US massacres have reached a new low by being staged in a primary school. The two items speak to different things; the danger of being hit by stray bullets while enjoying nature vs the danger of being targeted in what should be a safe zone in societal terms. There’s a link there, and if you can run the narratives in parallel then you have a potent work of art.

That’s the key though. This seems for all the world like a political discourse, writing a song about gun control, but unless you’re a folk singer writing to topical currency, there is more potential in examining the lyrical possibilities. The theme isn’t the outlawing of firearms, it’s the notion of having prescribed locations for the discharging of offensive weapons, so that’s the broad direction. But the writing of the song would entail different considerations if you hope to produce the superior or definitive piece.

He’s not old enough for shootouts excepting to pretend as in a game of Cowboys and Indians (though I doubt this is still a children’s playground game) so why is this terrible thing visited on the country’s youngest in their place of learning? So, the question for the songwriting (as opposed to the political essay) course of action is, is this the hook; the inappropriateness of the setting the shooting takes place? If so, you no longer need allude to the events that sparked this approach, this angle.

The advantage of using this aspect to represent the theme, is that it can also cover the idea of shooting in places where others are pursuing recreational activity. We are providing less spots for smokers to light up, why are we creating more spaces for discharging of rifles?

I’m not saying that you would want to tackle this subject or write to this theme, but you don’t need to actively pursue an interest in Don’t Shoot, the song about having to tell someone not to shoot in this place. Or in Offshoot, a song that lists places where hunters and sporting shooters can go. It’s an exercise like any other.

A headful of Theme

The theme of ‘Not With That Clown’ is in the subtitle ‘great songs of sexual jealousy’. We know the theme is sexual jealousy and then, being a various artists release, there will be different takes in each individual song. Whether it’s Billy Bragg in an odd signature or Paul Kelly declaring he’d rather go blind than “see you with another guy”, the theme remains throughout. It’s perfectly executed because the material has been selected to fit the theme rather than because there are contractual obligations or favours owed. This also has the effect of allowing the collection to wander in style and genre while remaining in the mood.

It doesn’t hurt that sexual jealousy is a powerful thing to write about, resonates with the listener (viewer/audience of some description), and features in chart busting songs aplenty

Nonetheless, even a calculated pitch can resonate if the delivery is superb. And if it sounds real that also counts.

Them a tic

Was I riffing with that last post on theme? Yes I was.

It’s not always easy to identify the theme, defined in Wikipedia as “central topic, subject, or concept the author is trying to point out”

The theme of ‘Rambling Man‘ by Hank Williams is compulsion to travel based on one’s God-given nature. You can argue the wording of this definition, but you get the drift: if you add the elements and listen to the narrative voice you get a fair picture.

It’s no wonder there has been confusion over theme and subject. Let’s take a look at another country artist’s song: ‘It’s Been a Good Year for the Roses’ by George Jones. Because the title is a counterpoint to the theme, subject and theme are separated in their meaning to some degree. The subject is an awkward meeting of lovers in the act of separation with the first person narrator recounting seeming domestic drudge distractions: ‘the lawn could stand another mowing’ ‘it’s been a good year for the roses’ but acutely aware of the real feeling in the room “the half-filled cup of coffee you poured and didn’t drink”

This is too much information for the theme. The theme would be divorce or strained relationship; the end of domestic bliss. Themes encapsulate rather than articulate.

What of the topic? The topic may be the same as the subject. There may even be an argument for the explanation proffered two paragraphs ago to be the topic, rather than subject. But consider the setting of an essay for exam conditions. This isn’t how you (necessarily) write a song but it gets across what a topic is in the scheme of things.
The topic is a rambling man. Because you’ve only got the half hour or the certain word count to do this in, the person assigning the topic has to keep it simple but potent enough with intent to allow you to come up with a good example and gain extra points. You don’t need to know what makes a man ramble to write an assignment on it; just use your imagination. The topic of a man whose urge to ramble is brought on by the sound of a train is not reliant on knowing anything else about him. Other rambling men may yet hitch rides into future song narratives and be quite different from the fellow in Hank’s song.

The topic in George Jones’ song is how the narrator is lead, through the hurt and ennui of the situation, to remark on the state of the garden.